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What are some great places to visit in your country?
Our country has many beautiful places and delicious restarants.
Eespecally, Gyeongju city visit many foreigner. It is city of history and culture.
and Seoul has many high buliding and a lot of peoples. There are restaurants and shopping.
I\'m sure you will like there. If you visit in Korea, I recommand Seoul, Gyeongju, Busan and Jeju island.
Thank you. Enjoy your weekend. ^^
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Hi, Sir [이름]!
Thank you. Enjoy your weekend. ^^ [Thank you Sir [이름], have a great weekend! ^^]
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! Your answers are on point. :)
~ T. Camille
What are some great places to visit in your country?
Our country has many beautiful places and delicious restarants.
Our country has many beautiful places and delicious restarants.
>> Our country has many beautiful places and restaurants that serve delicious dishes.
Eespecally, Gyeongju city visit many foreigner.
>> Many foreigners visit different places especially Gyeongju City.
It is a city of history and culture.
>> CORRECT!
and Seoul has many high buliding and a lot of peoples.
>> Seoul on the other hand has many people and buildings.
There are restaurants and shopping.
>> There are many restaurants and shopping malls.
I\'m sure you will like there.
>> I\'m sure you will like it there.
If you visit in Korea, I recommand Seoul, Gyeongju, Busan, and Jeju island.
>> If you visit in Korea, I recommend Seoul, Gyeongju, Busan, and Jeju island.
Thank you. Enjoy your weekend. ^^ [Thank you Sir [이름], have a great weekend! ^^]
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