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Is food quality or food variety more important at a buffet?
I think quality is better. If food quality is poor, I can\'t eat many food And disapointed that restaurant. So I always check food quality and go to good quality buffet
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I think quality is better.
>> I think quality is more important.
If food quality is poor, I can\'t eat many food And disapointed that restaurant.
>> If the food quality is poor, I can’t eat much, and I’m disappointed with the restaurant.
OR >> If the food quality is bad, I lose my appetite and feel disappointed.
So I always check food quality and go to good quality buffet
>> So I always check the food quality and go to a high-quality buffet.
OR >> That’s why I always check the food quality before choosing a buffet.
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