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Which is more important, diet or exercise? Why?
I think exercise is more important because we don\'t need extra time for diet but exercise need extra time so exercise harder than diet and we have to grow mucle for healthy life
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I think exercise is more important because we don\'t need extra time for diet but exercise need extra time so exercise harder than diet and we have to grow mucle for healthy life
>> I think exercise is more important because we don’t need extra time for dieting, but exercise requires extra time, so it is harder than dieting. We also need to build muscle for a healthy life.
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