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2026-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Question: Do you think kids should be allowed to eat fast food? Why? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences. Answer: Not eating fast food is very good. But we maybe can\'t do never eating fast food. So we must have a habit that \" reducing to eat fast food.

강사 첨삭

Hey, Belle. I appreciate your honest opinion and thank you for the time and effort you spent doing your homework. You did a good job. I hope you keep it up. See you in our next class. ~Teacher Jane c\",) 


Not eating fast food is very good. 
>> CORRECT 

But we maybe can\'t do never eating fast food. 
>> CORRECT 

So we must have a habit that \" reducing to eat fast food.
>> So we must have a habit of reducing eating fat food. 

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