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2012-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) Tom does not collect stamps. (not/to collect) 2) You do not sing songs in the bathroom. (not/to sing) 3) Julie does not work in the garden. (not/to work) 4) I do not sit at home. (not/to sit) 5) Tina and Kate do not open the windows. (not/to open) I noticed that most my co-workers have a plan to go on a trip this Summer. Rina who works at the educational affairs will go to China this Sunday. Teresa who works at the support department will go to Singapore in coming August. It's just as well that I will go on a trip. If I don't go, I will envy them. I will be busy getting ready for my trip. Because I must get a wonderful trip than them. I'm the green-eyed monster. The problem is my picture The ability that I take a picture is terrible. The picture should be a proof that I had a wonderful trip. I should only take landscape pictures without me. I will be alone.

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Hello Miss. [Name]! Wow! I envy you..I hope I could also go on a trip this year, but I think that will never happen!:(( By the way, I just want you to enjoy your trip Miss. [Name] okay.. Going on a trip alone is also fun,so...ajah!!kkk xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 1) Tom does not collect stamps. (not/to collect) >>correct2) You do not sing songs in the bathroom. (not/to sing) >>correct3) Julie does not work in the garden. (not/to work) >>correct4) I do not sit at home. (not/to sit) >>correct5) Tina and Kate do not open the windows. (not/to open)>>correctI noticed that most my co-workers have a plan to go on a trip this Summer. >>correctRina who works at the educational affairs will go to China this Sunday. >>correctTeresa who works at the support department will go to Singapore in coming August. >>correctIt\'s just as well that I will go on a trip. >>correctIf I don\'t go, I will envy them. >>correct >>If I wont go I will envy them.I will be busy getting ready for my trip. Because I must get a wonderful trip than them. >>correctI\'m the green-eyed monster.>>correct The problem is my picture >>correctThe ability that I take a picture is terrible. >>My ability of taking pictures is terrible. >>Im not good at taking pictures.The picture should be a proof that I had a wonderful trip. >>Those pictures will be my proof that I had a wonderful trip.I should only take landscape pictures without me. >>I should only take pictures of landscapes without me.I will be alone. >>correct

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