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Which do you prefer: going to the gym to exercise or playing active sports? Why?
I think both of same. Exercise gym is more boring than active sports but almost active sports neet to go far and get a appointment. It\'s tiresome
강사 첨삭
I think both of same.
>> I think both are similar.
Exercise gym is more boring than active sports but almost active sports neet to go far and get a appointment.
>> Exercising at the gym is more boring than active sports, but most active sports require traveling far and making an appointment.
It\'s tiresome
>> It’s tiresome. (add period)
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