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When I worked in the Middle East, I always missed my family because I could only get a long holiday every 4 months of work. Aside from my homesickness, the language barrier, and long work hours, I liked most of the culture and food in the Middle East. It was a valuable experience for me.
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Good afternoon, Ho [이름]!
I got you there. This is the struggle of expats when they are working in other countries. I have a question. I know some Koreans can bring their families to the country where they are working. What about in your case?
Aki~
When I worked in the Middle East, I always missed my family because I could only get a long holiday every 4 months of work.
>> CORRECT!
Aside from my homesickness, the language barrier, and long work hours, I liked most of the culture and food in the Middle East
>> CORRECT!
It was a valuable experience for me.
>> CORRECT!
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