homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What do parents look for when choosing a hair salon for their child?
What special skills should stylists have when working with children?
Should kids’ salons offer extras like balloons, stickers, or sweets during haircut?
I think it good to go to hair salon close to home. In future My son have to go hair salon every month.
and the head of a hair salon must be nice. we often need to go hair salon.
not need. hair salons try to provide some food for don\'t cry. we will watch the video.
but my son cried.. however we have complete cool hairstyle.
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
and the head of a hair salon must be nice.
not need. hair salons try to provide some food for don\'t cry.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.
-Teacher Ash
I think it good to go to hair salon close to home.
>> I think it is good to visit a hair salon close to home.
In future My son have to go hair salon every month.
>> In the future my son has to go to a hair salon every month.
and the head of a hair salon must be nice.
>> The manager of the hair salon must be nice.
we often need to go hair salon.
>> We often need to visit the hair salon.
not need. hair salons try to provide some food for don\'t cry.
>> It\'s not needed but they should at least try to provide some food, so the child does not get upset.
we will watch the video.
>> Then, we can watch a video to distract them.
but my son cried.. however we have complete cool hairstyle.
>> However, my son cried, but he ended up having a cool hairstyle.
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