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Do you think technology (fitness apps, trackers, online workouts) helps or hinders a healthy lifestyle?
I think technology help our healthy lifestyle.
Some watch record excercise so we can get motivation.
Not only that we can record how much we take calories with some apps so that help control take food and drink
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I think technology help our healthy lifestyle.
Some watch record excercise so we can get motivation.
>> Some watches and fitness trackers record our exercise, so we can stay motivated.
>> I think technology helps our healthy lifestyle.
Some watch record excercise so we can get motivation.
>> Some watches and fitness trackers record our exercise, so we can stay motivated.
Not only that we can record how much we take calories with some apps so that help control take food and drink
>> Not only that, but we can also track how many calories we consume using apps, which helps us control what we eat and drink.
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