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2026-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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Is teamwork always better than working alone? Do you think personality matters in teamwork? Is it easier to work alone when you are under pressure? yes teamwork better than alone. If I don\'t know work, team sometimes solve that issue. I think so, personality is very very important it. because we should one team. but it is not easy. If I feeling pressure, I ask to them. could you help me? It is important not to waste time.

강사 첨삭

Cheong [이름],

Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.

-Teacher Ash

yes teamwork better than alone.

>> Yes, teamwork is better than working alone.

If I don\'t know work, team sometimes solve that issue.

>> If I don\'t know what to do, my team would know how to solve the issue.

I think so, personality is very very important it.

>> I think personality is extremely important at work.

because we should one team. but it is not easy.

>> We should stay as a team even if it is not easy.

If I feeling pressure, I ask to them. could you help me?

>> If I feel pressured, I can ask them for help.

It is important not to waste time.

>> CORRECT!

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