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What do you want to include in your ideal fitness program?
I want to include body correction program because I always use computer so I have a turtle neck. When I did pilates at that time I can make better my body condition
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I want to include body correction program because I always use computer so I have a turtle neck.
>> I want to include a body correction program because I always use the computer and have a turtle neck.
OR >> I want to include a body correction program because I always use the computer, which caused me to develop a turtle neck.
When I did pilates at that time I can make better my body condition
>> When I did Pilates at that time, it helped improve my body condition.
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