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The fact that people in many countries are using Korean products makes me proud. However, many people in Korea are using Apple products now. As far as Samsung is concerned, this is great motivation, as they are trying to win back market share by making better products.
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Hello, Ho [이름]!
Yes, you are on point! When our products are used and consumed by our country and can also be a challenge to other manufacturers to provide better services and innovate some products.
Thank you for always sharing your thoughts here.
The fact that people in many countries are using Korean products makes me proud.
>> CORRECT!
Or >> Since Koreans products are patronized globally, it makes me proud.
However, many people in Korea are using Apple products now.
>> CORRECT!
As far as Samsung is concerned, this is great motivation, as they are trying to win back market share by making better products.
>> CORRECT!
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