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Which do you prefer when traveling: adventure activities or relaxing vacations? Why?
I think I don\'t like both of them. I prefer look around cultural asset and high building or some interesting ones. So i always walk a lot and visit many place when I go to travel. I realy like see new things
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I think I don\'t like both of them.
>> I don’t like either of them.
I prefer look around cultural asset and high building or some interesting ones.
>> I prefer looking around cultural sites, tall buildings, or other interesting places.
So i always walk a lot and visit many place when I go to travel.
>> So I always walk a lot and visit many places when I travel.
I realy like see new things
>> I really enjoy seeing new things.
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