homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What’s been the highlight of your workweek so far?
Do you prefer working early mornings or later in the day?
What tool or app do you use at work that you couldn’t live without?
It is important my network skill. I can solve network issue and have a lot of experience.
so I working as network in IT. I prefer working later in the day. because I am good at focusing at night.
I have kids of software tool. but It need to be licensed. so I cannot using personally.
강사 첨삭
[이름][이름],
Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.
-Teacher Ash
so I working as network in IT.
I have kids of software tool. but It need to be licensed. so I cannot using personally.
It is important my network skill.
>> My networking IT skills are the most important.
I can solve network issue and have a lot of experience.
>> Whenever I solve a network issue, I gain more experience.
so I working as network in IT.
>> That’s why I work as the IT specialist in charge of the network system.
I prefer working later in the day. because I am good at focusing at night.
>> I prefer working later in the day because I focus better at night.
I have kids of software tool. but It need to be licensed. so I cannot using personally.
>> I have different kinds of software tool, but it needs to be licensed, ant it is not for personal use.
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