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2026-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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What accomplishments or contributions justify a salary increase? How often should salary increases be reviewed or adjusted? I thought I could increase salary by hardly work this year. but director said that most people raise it fairly. so I don\'t understood it. but now I understood some. because if I don\'t work hardly, I can increase salary. I think once a year is right.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름],

Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.

-Teacher Ash

I thought I could increase salary by hardly work this year. but director said that most people raise it fairly.

>> I thought I could increase my salary by working really hard, but the director said that most people get increase every year whether they work extra hard or not.

so I don\'t understood it. but now I understood some. because if I don\'t work hardly, I can increase salary.

>> At first, I did not understand, but then I realized what he meant, so I might not work as hard as before.

I think once a year is right.

>> I think getting an increase every year is just right.

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