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Is there a country or a place that you will never visit?
I think I never go to North Korea.
There are too dangerous.
I don\'t know exactly.
Somedays If Korea will be unify I maybe go to there.
In the past time many Korean want to unify.
But, Now we most of young people don\'t want unify.
Thank you. ^^
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Hi, Sir [이름]!
Thank you. ^^
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! Your answers are on point. :)
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Is there a country or a place that you will never visit?
I think I never go to North Korea.
I think I never go to North Korea.
>> I think I will never go to North Korea.
OR >> I think I will never visit North Korea.
There are too dangerous.
>> It\'s too dangerous.
I don\'t know exactly.
>> I don\'t know it exactly.
Somedays If Korea will be unify I maybe go to there.
>> If Korea would be unified someday, maybe I can go there.
In the past time many Korean want to unify.
>> In the past, many Koreans want to unify.
But, Now we most of young people don\'t want unify.
>> But now, most young people don\'t want to unify.
Thank you. ^^
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