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How do you usually decide where to go on vacation?
I have my travel wish list. So if i reserve travel for vacation. I select one in that list according to at that time\'s status. In my wish list have macao and few japan city and europe.
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I have my travel wish list.
>> I have a travel wish list.
So if i reserve travel for vacation. I select one in that list according to at that time\'s status.
>> When I plan a vacation, I choose a destination from that list depending on the situation at the time.
>> I have a travel wish list.
So if i reserve travel for vacation. I select one in that list according to at that time\'s status.
>> When I plan a vacation, I choose a destination from that list depending on the situation at the time.
OR >> When I go on vacation, I pick a place from it depending on the circumstances.
In my wish list have macao and few japan city and europe.
In my wish list have macao and few japan city and europe.
>> My wish list includes Macao, a few cities in Japan, and Europe.
OR >> My travel wish list has Macao, a few Japanese cities, and Europe.
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