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If given a chance, would you ever visit Burj Khalifa in Dubai?
I don\'t know Burj Khalifa in Dubai.
So, I search the information by Google.
I remembered this bulding.
I watched movie Misson Impossible 4 and Tom cuse did an action there.
The movie was very fun.
If I got a chance I want to go there with my family.
Thank you. T.Camille ^^
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Hi, Sir [이름]!
Thank you. T. Camille ^^ [You\'re welcome Sir [이름]! ^^]
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! Your answers are on point. :)
~ T. Camille
If given a chance, would you ever visit Burj Khalifa in Dubai?
I don\'t know Burj Khalifa in Dubai.
I don\'t know Burj Khalifa in Dubai.
>> CORRECT!
So, I search the information by Google.
>> So, I searched the information in Google.
I remembered this bulding.
>> I remembered this building.
I watched movie Misson Impossible 4 and Tom cuse did an action there.
>> I watched movie Mission Impossible 4 and Tom Cruise did an action scene there.
The movie was very fun.
>> CORRECT!
If I got a chance I want to go there with my family.>> CORRECT!
Thank you. T. Camille ^^ [You\'re welcome Sir [이름]! ^^]
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