homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: Do you think kids should have a curfew? Why or why not? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: I think kids should have a curfew. Because Kids walk on the street at night is very dangerous. We can\'t expect what weird things happen.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Belle. You can organize your ideas and express your thoughts with confidence. Your vocabulary range is improving, and you are beginning to use more varied sentence structures. You still make some grammatical and word choice errors. At times, ideas could be explained in more detail or connected more smoothly. Paying closer attention to sentence accuracy and revising your work will help strengthen your writing. Overall, you are making steady progress and have a solid foundation to continue developing more precise and effective writing skills. Great job! ~Teacher Jane
I think kids should have a curfew. Because Kids walk on the street at night is very dangerous.
>> I think kids should have a curfew because kids walking on the streets at night is very dangerous.
We can\'t expect what weird things happen.
>> We don\'t know what kind of weird things might happen.
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