homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your birthplace famous for?
How long have you lived in Anyang?
What is one good memory you have from your birthplace?
How is Anyang different now compared to before?
yes... I love Anyang City. because I lived in Anyang before married. maybe 28 yeares?
so Anyang city is one of big city. and Many people live in..There is many department , many park, and a lot of restaurant.
and Anyang is famous of playing soccer, Amusement park , zoo, street culture.
My grandmother and parents living in Anyang city.
and I have many good memories since I was young. because, There is having many my friend.
Actually , I hope to come back to the Anyang. but There is very very expensive apartment.
so I living in Osan yet....^^
강사 첨삭
[이름][이름],
Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.
-Ash
>> Yes! I love Anyang city.
because I lived in Anyang before married. maybe 28 yeares?
>> I lived in Anyang for about 28 years before I got married.
so Anyang city is one of big city.
>> Anyang is a big city.
and Many people live in..There is many department , many park, and a lot of restaurant.
>> There are many people, apartment buildings, restaurants and parks.
and Anyang is famous of playing soccer, Amusement park , zoo, street culture.
>> Anyang is also famous for its soccer games, amusement parks, zoos and the street culture.
My grandmother and parents living in Anyang city.
>>CORRECT!
and I have many good memories since I was young. because, There is having many my friend.
>> I have many good memories in Anyang when I was young because I had a lot of friends.
Actually , I hope to come back to the Anyang. but There is very very expensive apartment.
>> I honestly want to live in Anyang, but the apartments are so expensive.
so I living in Osan yet....^^
>> So, for now, I am living in Onsan.
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