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How is Seollal or Lunar New Year different from January 1st (Solar New Year) in Korea?
Do younger generations celebrate Seollal differently from older generations?
Why is rice cake soup traditionally eaten on Seollal?
It is not different for Seollal or Jan 1st. We just have celebrate day. and We have take rest. we can meet hometown parents and cousin.
The youngers has traveling and play the game. The elders will go to the hometown. and They will talk about them hometown.
I\'m not sure I think it\'s the influence of China. but we often eat rice cake soup. I personally like it. but My wife don\'t like it...
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I\'m not sure I think it\'s the influence of China. but we often eat rice cake soup.
It is not different for Seollal or Jan 1st.
>> I don\'t think there is a difference between Seollal or January 1st.
We just have celebrate day. and We have take rest.
>> We just have to celebrate the day and take a rest.
we can meet hometown parents and cousin.
>> We can also go home, visit our parents or meet our cousins.
The youngers has traveling and play the game.
>> The younger one\'s travel and play some games.
The elders will go to the hometown. and They will talk about them hometown.
>> The older generation would usually go back to their hometown and meet their friends.
I\'m not sure I think it\'s the influence of China. but we often eat rice cake soup.
>> I\'m not sure but I think eating rice cake soup during Seollal is a Chinese influence.
I personally like it. but My wife don\'t like it...
>> I personally like it, but my wife is not fond of it.
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