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2026-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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If you had one full week to rest, how would you spend it? Why is rest important during holidays? How long do you need to feel fully rested? Oh.. I\'m fine with just thinking about it. I want to spend for travel. If I get to rest of one week, I am going travel abroad. As far as I think, We need to meet my family and talk about my family. sometime I want to rest one month or at least 3 weeks. but I should get money for my family.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름],

Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.

-Ash

Oh.. I\'m fine with just thinking about it.

>> Oh... I\'m fine with just thinking about it.

I want to spend for travel.

>> I want to spend my time traveling abroad.

If I get to rest of one week, I am going travel abroad.

>> If I get a one-week rest, I am going travel abroad.

As far as I think, We need to meet my family and talk about my family.

>> In my opinion, rest is important for us to be able to spend time with our family.

sometime I want to rest one month or at least 3 weeks. but I should get money for my family.

>> Sometimes, I wanted to rest for a month or at least three weeks, but I know I need to work for my family.

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