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Did your last trip give you a new perspective on anything? If so, what was it? If not, why?
I get exprience stacking many white snow is really beutiful and salmon egg is really delicious. Before last trip I don\'t know snow is really beutiful and don\'t like salmon egg because fishy
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I get exprience stacking many white snow is really beutiful and salmon egg is really delicious.
>> I experienced stacking white snow and it was really beautiful. Salmon eggs were also really delicious.
Before last trip I don\'t know snow is really beutiful and don\'t like salmon egg because fishy
>> Before my last trip, I didn’t know snow was so beautiful, and I didn’t like salmon eggs because they were too fishy.
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