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2026-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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What do you like about orchestra? When did you start attending orchestra concerts? How does orchestra concerts differ from other kind of concerts (K-pop, ballad or jazz) that you have watched? I like Ochestra. I like to listen to classic music. When I was young, I played Bass Guitar. and I like sound the violin. I start to attend since travel Austria. When I come back to Korea, I started to participate in Orchestra concert twice one year. I feel like full of healing. and I full of emotional. I get goosebumps my body.

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[이름] [이름],

Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.

- Ash

I like Ochestra.

>> I like listening to the orchestra.

I like to listen to classic music.

>> I like to listen to classical music.

When I was young, I played Bass Guitar.

>> When I was young, I played the bass guitar.

and I like sound the violin.

>> I like the sound of the violin too.

I start to attend since travel Austria.

>> I started attending orchestra concerts when I came back from Austria.

When I come back to Korea, I started to participate in Orchestra concert twice one year.

>> When I come back to Korea, I started to watch orchestra concert twice a year.

I feel like full of healing. and I full of emotional.

>> I feel comforted and emotional just by listening to it.

I get goosebumps my body.

>> I also get goosebumps whenever I watch them play.

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