Homework
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Do you prefer small gatherings or big family reunions? Why?
I prefer small gathering because big family union need to check many things. They can\'t eat some food, check their time, check their favorite. So it makes me tired.
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I prefer small gathering because big family union need to check many things.
>> I prefer small gatherings because big family reunions require checking many things.
They can\'t eat some food, check their time, check their favorite. So it makes me tired.
>> Some people can’t eat certain foods, and we have to consider everyone’s schedule and preferences. It makes me tired.
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