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2012-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) I get a good mark. (to get) 2) Rita does an exercise. (to do) 3) We lay the table. (to lay) 4) Tim and Pat send text messages. (to send) 5) Oliver is fun. there was nothing into the gaps in last sentence. kkk Actually, I took a TOEIC last Sunday. I didn't study hard. But I have been talking with my teacher Cam for 5 months. I expected that I could listen English. I woke up early that day to arrive the examination site early. When I arrived there, I noticed that I went to wrong site. There was not my identification number in board. I enrolled Cheon-An middle school. I was standing in Cheon-An North middle school. I got a taxi heading for Cheon-An North middle school. Fortunately, I got there just in time. But I was trembling. Of course, I failed my exam. I couldn't hear and understand at all. And I didn't have enough time to solve all question. I will try it again.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss. [Name], I didn\'t know that you took your exam last weekend.. And like I always say, don\'t give up..:) You are such a very smart and positive woman, and I know that no one will hinder you in doing everything you want Miss. [Name].. You know Im always here to help and support you.. Ajah Miss. [Name]! xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 1) I get a good mark. (to get) >>correct2) Rita does an exercise. (to do) >>correct3) We lay the table. (to lay) >>correct4) Tim and Pat send text messages. (to send) >>correct5) Oliver is fun. there was nothing into the gaps in last sentence. kkk>>correctActually, I took a TOEIC last Sunday. >>correctI didn\'t study hard. But I have been talking with my teacher Cam for 5 months. >>correctI expected that I could listen English. >>correctI woke up early that day to arrive the examination site early. >>I woke up early that day to arrive at the examination site early.When I arrived there, I noticed that I went to wrong site. >>But when I arrived there, I noticed that I went to the wrong place.There was not my identification number in board. >>My identification number was not indicated there.I enrolled Cheon-An middle school. I was standing in Cheon-An North middle school. >>correctI got a taxi heading for Cheon-An North middle school. >>correctFortunately, I got there just in time. >>correctBut I was trembling. Of course, I failed my exam. >>correctI couldn\'t hear and understand at all. >>correctAnd I didn\'t have enough time to solve all question. >>correct..all questions..I will try it again >>correct

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