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Should there be planned activities at family gatherings? Why?
I think i live with my parent so usally don\'t need plan but sometimes need plan. Because when we go to other play or do birthday party we need to move together. However almost times we get family gethering netually.
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I think i live with my parent so usally don\'t need plan but sometimes need plan.
>> I think I live with my parents, so I usually don’t need to make plans. But sometimes I do.
Because when we go to other play or do birthday party we need to move together.
>> When we go somewhere else or attend a birthday party, we need to move together.
However almost times we get family gethering netually.
>> However, most of the time, we have family gatherings naturally.
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