homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: What is the importance of following rules in school? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: following the rules is very important. Because If we didn\'t follow the rules, We don\'t know what happen. So we must follow the rules.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Belle. You can write simple sentences about familiar topics. Continue to focus on basic grammar, especially word order and verb forms. Take your time to check your work for small mistakes. Keep it up! ~Teacher Jane ^^
following the rules is very important.
>> Following the rules is very important.
Because If we didn\'t follow the rules, We don\'t know what happen. So we must follow the rules.
>> If we don\'t follow the rules, we would not know what is happing so we must follow the rules.
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