homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: Do you think parents should make their kids eat vegetables even if they don’t want to? Why? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: If kids don\'t wants, It is not better to recommend the vegetable, But It is good to eat vegetable. Because Our health will be better. So even if you don\'t want to eat vegetables, try eating vegetable for your health.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Belle. I appreciate you catching up on your homework. You can write simple sentences and complex ones. Continue to focus on basic grammar, especially word order and verb forms. Take your time to check your work for small mistakes. Keep it up! Have a great weekend. ~Teacher Jane ^^
If kids don\'t wants, It is not better to recommend the vegetable,
>> It is better for parents not to make their kids eat vegetables if they do not want o.
But It is good to eat vegetable. Because Our health will be better.
>> But it is good for kids to eat vegetables for their health.
So even if you don\'t want to eat vegetables, try eating vegetable for your health.
>> So even if kids don\'t want to eat vegetables, they should try eating vegetables for their health.
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