Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Which family tradition don\'t you like and why?
I think I don\'t have family tradition. When I was young i don\'t like package tour so, I want to stay at home and don\'t like trip. but these days we go to independent travel. I really like it
강사 첨삭
I think I don\'t have family tradition.
>> I think we don’t really have a family tradition.
When I was young i don\'t like package tour so, I want to stay at home and don\'t like trip.
>> When I was young, I didn’t like package tours, so I wanted to stay at home and didn’t like traveling.
but these days we go to independent travel. I really like it
>> But these days, we go on independent trips, and I really like it.
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