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Have you been successful in getting rid of a bad habit?
My bad habit is cross my legs when l sit. I felt this position was good and comfortable. But I get back\'s problems 2years ago. It was intervertebral disk. My position wasn\'t good this disease. I need to rid position. But it was my old habit. Before I knew it, my legs was crossed when l sit. So l always think \'don\'t cross my legs\'. Sometimes I talked a lot, at that time I noticed my leg\'s crossed, so l sat again. I didn\'t rid of a my habit yet. But l am trying constantly to fix my position.
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Hello Eva
Great job!
I can see you\'re trying hard to learn. Your discipline is good, keep it up. Keep applying in your daily life what you learn every day. Knowledge will give you power. Power will give the confidence that you need. You can do it if others can, so can you. Enjoy your day! ^^
T. Jeny
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My bad habit is cross my legs when l sit. I felt this position was good and comfortable.
My bad habit is cross my legs when l sit. I felt this position was good and comfortable.
>>My bad habit is crossing my legs when I sit. I thought this position was good and comfortable.
But I get back\'s problems 2years ago.
>>But I got back problems 2years ago.
It was intervertebral disk.
>>It was an intervertebral disk.
My position wasn\'t good this disease.
>>My position wasn\'t good with this disease.
I need to rid position. But it was my old habit.
>>I need to get rid of this position. But it was an old habit.
Before I knew it, my legs was crossed when l sit.
>>Before I knew it, my legs were crossed when I sat.
So l always think \'don\'t cross my legs\'.
>>So I always think not to cross my legs.
Sometimes I talked a lot, at that time I noticed my leg\'s crossed, so l sat again.
>>Sometimes I talked a lot, at that time I noticed my legs were crossed, so I changed my sitting position again.
I didn\'t rid of a my habit yet.
>>I haven\'t gotten rid of my habit yet.
But l am trying constantly to fix my position.
>>correct
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