homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Should everyone aim for promotion, or is it okay to stay in the same role long term?
Does being excellent at your current job guarantee success in a higher role? Why?
It is okay I stay same role. Because our company increase a little salary every year. but If I want to increase more, I try promotion.
To get a promotion, I have to work 3 job...
yes If I am good at role, I get success guarantee. Because he is acknowledged. so I get promotion guarantee.
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
To get a promotion, I have to work 3 job...
yes If I am good at role, I get success guarantee.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
-Teacher Ash
It is okay I stay same role.
>> It is okay to stay in the same role.
Because our company increase a little salary every year.
>> It is because our company increase our salary every year.
but If I want to increase more, I try promotion.
>> However, if we want to increase our salary, we have to get promoted.
To get a promotion, I have to work 3 job...
>> In order to do that, I have to experience working three roles within the company.
yes If I am good at role, I get success guarantee.
>> If I am good at my job, then I might be successful in getting a promotion.
Because he is acknowledged. so I get promotion guarantee.
>> If I get acknowledged, then my promotion is guaranteed.
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