homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: Do you think children should be allowed to choose the subjects they want to learn in school? Why? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: I think It is not good for student. Because All the subjects are important. So If student choose the subject, hard subject will be not chosen.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Belle. Your writing shows that you understand some basic vocabulary and sentence patterns. You can communicate your main idea, even if the sentences are short. Keep practicing and do not be afraid to write more. Writing regularly will help you become more confident and accurate in English. Good work and keep going! ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I think It is not good for student. Because All the subjects are important.
>> I think it is not good for students because all subjects are important.
So If student choose the subject, hard subject will be not chosen.
>> So if students choose the subjects, hard subjects will not be chosen.
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