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2026-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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How many days of leave do employees usually get each year? How would you respond if your leave request was denied? I have 15dayoff. vacation increase 1dayoff every 2 years. so I use dayoff for personal schedule. we don\'t respond for vacation. because it is the individual. I can use anytime, anywhere. The government suggest that company don\'t touch the private vacation.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름],

Thanks for sharing your ideas here.

-Teacher Ash

I have 15dayoff.

>> I have 15 days of leave credits every year.

vacation increase 1dayoff every 2 years.

>> My vacation leaves credits increase every after two years.

so I use dayoff for personal schedule.

>> I use my day off for personal errands.

we don\'t respond for vacation. because it is the individual. I can use anytime, anywhere.

>> My vacation leave cannot be denied because it is my right, and I can use it anytime and anywhere.

The government suggest that company don\'t touch the private vacation.

>> The government imposed that companies are not allowed to deny vacation leave requests.

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