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2026-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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What motivates you to keep doing your best at work? What simple activity always improves your mood? I always do my best at work. because I get salary. so I want to get more salary. I felt comfortable on my way home. And I feel comfortable when I exercise. so I enjoy workout. When I get stress, I solve it with workout.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름],

Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.

-Ash

I always do my best at work. because I get salary. so I want to get more salary.

>> I always do my best at work because I am getting paid, and I also want my salary to increase.

I felt comfortable on my way home.

>> Going home always improves my mood.

And I feel comfortable when I exercise. so I enjoy workout.

>> My mood also improves when I exercise because it is something I enjoy.

When I get stress, I solve it with workout.

>> When I get stressed, I work out to release it.

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