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2026-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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How can technology and innovation help Korea become more environmentally friendly? What responsibilities do citizens in Korea have to help reduce climate [이름]e? wow,, it is very difficult questions.. I think we replace from AI.. we challenge technology to AI.. so we have advance technology.. Actually, AI robot replace plant worker.. some scared.. I don\'t know.. but we have to try make improvements for Earth environment.. we have to reduce trash and save water , reduce using plastic.. too much trash..

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름],

Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.

-Teacher Ash

wow,, it is very difficult questions..

>> Wow! These are very difficult questions.

I think we replace from AI.. we challenge technology to AI..

>> I think we have to replace and challenge our technology by using AI.

so we have advance technology..

>> In this way, we will be able to improve our technology.

Actually, AI robot replace plant worker.. some scared..

>>Actually, some plant workers have already been replaced by AI, so some are scared.

I don\'t know.. but we have to try make improvements for Earth environment..

>> I don\'t know, but we have to try to make our technology environmentally friendly.

we have to reduce trash and save water , reduce using plastic.. too much trash..

>> We have to reduce trash, lessen plastic production and conserve water.

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