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Is it always a good idea to have more than 2 jobs?
In the past I wanted to get 2 jobs because I wanted earn money.
But now, I satisfied my just 1 job.
Because I think to rest time need in life.
Thank you. ^^
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Hi, Sir [이름]!
Thank you. ^^ [ You\'re welcome Sir [이름], have a great evening! ^^ ~ T. Camille ]
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! Your answers are on point. :)
~ T. Camille
Is it always a good idea to have more than 2 jobs?
In the past I wanted to get 2 jobs because I wanted earn money.
In the past I wanted to get 2 jobs because I wanted earn money.
>> CORRECT!
But now, I satisfied my just 1 job.
>> But now, I am satisfied with just one job.
Because I think to rest time need in life.
>> It\'s because we also need to have a rest.
Thank you. ^^ [ You\'re welcome Sir [이름], have a great evening! ^^ ~ T. Camille ]
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