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[이름] [이름],
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-Teacher Ash
I like many actors..
>>I like many actors.
I like Robert Dawni junior and Emma stone, and like Lee Byung-hun and Hyun-Bin in korea.
>> I like Robert Downey Jr., Emma Stone, and Korean actors like Lee Byung-hun and Hyun Bin.
I love being good at acting.
>> I love good acting.
They are good at acting.
>>CORRECT
OR >> They are good actors.
If I make own movie, I want to make adventure and SF series. so I loved Iron man .
>>If I create my own movie, I want to make an adventure and Sci-fi series just like the movie Iron Man.
I am looking forward to meet Rebert Dawni junior in theater.
>> I want to meet Robert Downey Jr. in the future.
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