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First of all, I try to keep my mind calm and positive.
I also reflect on why this situation has happened to me.
After that, I try to find something positive in it.
This helps me maintain my mental health.
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Hi, Ho [이름]!
These days, people should know and learn how to manage stress or how to handle things when they are burned out. It\'s good to seek help from people whom we trust and ask for professional help when needed. After all, we need open ears and a warm heart to listen. Have a good afternoon!
Aki~
First of all, I try to keep my mind calm and positive.
>>> CORRECT!
I also reflect on why this situation has happened to me.
>>> I also reflect on why this situation is happening to me.
After that, I try to find something positive in it.
>>> CORRECT!
This helps me maintain my mental health.
>>> CORRECT!
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