Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you think could fix rush hour?
Need to make less transport dispatching interval and make more transport route. The reason don\'t use transport is crowded inside or no route or time is not fit. Unfoutunatly that method need many money so goverment can\'t do that.
강사 첨삭
Need to make less transport dispatching interval and make more transport route.
>> We need to reduce the interval between transports and add more transport routes.
The reason don\'t use transport is crowded inside or no route or time is not fit.
>> People avoid using public transport because it’s crowded, some areas have no routes, or the schedule doesn’t fit their needs.
Unfoutunatly that method need many money so goverment can\'t do that.
>> Unfortunately, this solution requires a lot of money, so the government cannot implement it.
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