Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Should commuters be allowed to eat or drink on public transport? Why or why not?
Don\'t allowed food on public transport. Many people drop the food when they take foods. Even if on public transport easier then another place and if they drop the food, they can\'t make clearly again. So it will make bad smell
강사 첨삭
Don\'t allowed food on public transport.
>> Food should not be allowed on public transport.
Many people drop the food when they take foods.
>> Many people drop their food while eating.
Even if on public transport easier then another place and if they drop the food, they can\'t make clearly again. So it will make bad smell
>> On public transport, it’s harder to clean up than in other places, and if food is dropped, it can’t be cleaned properly. This can cause a bad smell.
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