Homework

2026-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

학생이 쓴 원문

If you could turn any interest into a job, what would it be? :If I were a younger, I think I would have studied nursing. I obtained a nursing assistant license during a brief break during the COVID-19 pandemic because it suited my aptitude. Starting from the next class, I would like us to choose a topic we want to discuss and prepare for the class in advance. How about we talk about tourist attractions in Seoul next Tuesday?

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], 

Thanks for doing the homework. 
I once thought of becoming a nurse before, but I change my mind. 
Enjoy your weekend!

-Teacher Ash


If I were a younger, I think I would have studied nursing.
>> If I was younger, I would have studied nursing. 

I obtained a nursing assistant license during a brief break during the COVID-19 pandemic because it suited my aptitude.
>> I obtained a nursing assistant license during a brief break in the COVID-19 pandemic because it suited my aptitude. 

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