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2026-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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Do you think it’s better to plan everything or live spontaneously? Why? What would you do if all your plans for a week were canceled? I like to plan everything. but I cannot do it. because suddenly something unexpected happens. I already want to know what will happen in the future. I am going to go travelling. I always need a rest. so I want to leave . I want to go to the beach. but I don\'t like swim. I like to see the sea.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름],

Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.

-Teacher Ash

I like to plan everything. but I cannot do it. because suddenly something unexpected happens.

>> I like to plan everything, but I cannot do it because something unexpected usually happens.

I already want to know what will happen in the future.

>> I want to know what happens in the future.

I am going to go travelling.

>> CORRECT!

I always need a rest. so I want to leave .

>> I need to rest all the time, so I want to go on leave.

I want to go to the beach. but I don\'t like swim.

>> I want to go to the beach, but I don’t like to swim.

I like to see the sea.

>> CORRECT!

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