homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If you had no responsibilities today, how would you spend your time?
How do you decide what to prioritize during the day?
Do you need a rest?^^ you tell me a question. almost what do you spend your time if you get a lot of time.
I think you need rest. do you have a vacation?
I can decide to start priority work . I did urgent work and if need a rest , I have a coffee.
강사 첨삭
Chan [이름],
I just realized I asked the same questions before. My apologies.
Yes, I need a vacation. ^^
-Teacher Ash
Do you need a rest?^^
>>CORRECT!
you tell me a question.
>> You asked me these questions before.
almost what do you spend your time if you get a lot of time.
>> It’s all about how I should spend my free time.
I think you need rest.
>>CORRECT!
do you have a vacation?
>> Do you have any vacation plans?
I can decide to start priority work .I did urgent work and if need a rest , I have a coffee.
>> I prioritize work by focusing on urgent tasks, and if I need rest, I have a cup of coffee.
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