Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think that governments should encourage public transport more?
Yes government need to encourage public transport. Actually already they encourage public transport. If many people use public transport, we can\'t make clear air and less traffic jam. So these days they give adventage to people who use the public transport.
강사 첨삭
Yes government need to encourage public transport.
>> Yes, the government needs to encourage public transport.
Actually already they encourage public transport.
>> In fact, they already do.
If many people use public transport, we can\'t make clear air and less traffic jam.
>> If more people use public transport, we can have cleaner air and less traffic congestion.
So these days they give adventage to people who use the public transport.
>> These days, they offer benefits to people who use public transport.
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