Homework 15
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. What do you prefer spontaneity or stability?
A. I used to prefer spontaneity when I was young. But as I get older, I become to prefer stability more. I think it is natural to seek for stable life as work, marriage and all that jazz. But sometimes I miss my past days when I went travel without any plan and put my thing into action immediately. I think spontaneity makes me energetic and confident and stability makes me satisfied. I want to keep both characters in my mind so that I can use them in accordance with the situation that I have to deal with.
강사 첨삭
WOW! Impressive! Everything perfect Bomi! Nice of you to share! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
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But as I get older, I become to prefer stability more.
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I think it is natural to seek for stable life as work, marriage and all that jazz.
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But sometimes I miss my past days when I went travel without any plan and put my thing into action immediately.
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I think spontaneity makes me energetic and confident and stability makes me satisfied.
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I want to keep both characters in my mind so that I can use them in accordance with the situation that I have to deal with.
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