Homework 15

ESSAY: Do you think that technology has a big influence to people? Why? Yes, I think technology has a huge influence to peole. That is because our lives have changed a lot according to the development of technology. In the past, we could not contact whenever we want, and we had to send a letter, wait the letter for a long time. However, now we can just write an e-mail whenver we want to contact and we can get an e-mail immediately. With the development of technology, the way of our life has changed a lot.

Hi there Nicole!^^ Again your ideas have a great message. I think everybody would admit to the conviniences of technology and the advantage is more of a priority for us when we accept the changes. Take care!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Do you think that technology has a big influence to people? Why?>> CORRECTYes, I think technology has a huge influence to peole. >> Yes, I think technology has a huge influence to people. That is because our lives have changed a lot according to the development of technology. >> CORRECT OR> The reason fo this is that a lot has changed according to the development of technology.In the past, we could not contact whenever we want, and we had to send a letter, wait the letter for a long time. >> In the past, we could not contact whenever we want, and when we had to send a letter, we wait for  the letter for a long time. However, now we can just write an e-mail whenver we want to contact and we can get an e-mail immediately. >>  However, now we can just write an e-mail whenever we want to contact and we can get an e-mail immediately. With the development of technology, the way of our life has changed a lot. >> CORRECT OR> We have a lot of changes now that our technology has changed.