homework 15

2016-07-07 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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What would you do if you found a $100 bill lying in the street? What if that $100 were in a wallet? If there are my friend or family at the situation, i would have bought something to eat right away. Because it is interesting situation enjoying the lucky time together. But i found the money alone, i'll buy my needs likes appliance, telecom fee, traffic fare and study books. If i saw the wallet which in $100, maybe i seek for the wallet's owner through ID card, license information. And if it can connect to owner, then it is simple. On the other hand, if i don't find the host information, i will hestitate if i go to police.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear Sun!

Thank you so much for sending this in...

Great job!

Talk to you again tomorrow and have a great day...

xoxoTeacher Cam

What would you do if you found a $100 bill lying in the street?

What if that $100 were in a wallet? 
If there are my friend or family at the situation, i would have bought something to eat right away.

>>If I found the money with a friend or a family member, I would\'ve bought something to eat right away.
Because it is interesting situation enjoying the lucky time together.
>>Because it is interesting to spend time with them.
But i found the money alone, i\'ll buy my needs likes appliance, telecom fee, traffic fare and study books.
>>correct
If i saw the wallet which in $100, maybe i seek for the wallet\'s owner through ID card, license information.

>>correct

And if it can connect to owner, then it is simple.
>>And if I can contact the owner, it will be easier.
On the other hand, if i don\'t find the host information, i will hestitate if i go to police.

>>correct

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