Homework 15
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Would you like to have your own business?
No, I don\'t like to have my own business. Because, business required heavy responsibility. It is too hard to me. Also, businessmen should too much to care about their work.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ramie!
You are correct when you said that putting up your own business requires heavy responsibility.
See you later . Thank you for always doing your homework.
-Teacher Shelly-
Would you like to have your own business?
No, I don\'t like to have my own business.
>>> Correct!
Because, business required heavy responsibility.
>>> Having my own business requires a heavy responsibility.
It is too hard to me.
>>> It will be hard for me.
Also, businessmen should too much to care about their work.
>>> Business men should take very good care of their work.
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