Homework 15
학생이 쓴 원문
What’s the best and worst birthday you’ve ever had?
My best birthday is 18th birthday!! Because many friends and people congratulated me. Also, I received many gifts. But 17th birthday is worst birthday, since my birthday was day of midterm exam. So I couldn\'t go to restaurant, also I couldn\'t eat see mustard soup.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ramie!
It is nice to know that yesterday was your best birthday ever. They all surprised you and greeted you a happy birthday. I hope to see the gifts you received later.
-Teacher Shelly-
My best birthday is 18th birthday!!
>>> My best birthday is my 18th birthday.
Because many friends and people congratulated me.
>>> Many people greeted me a happy birthday.
Also, I received many gifts.
>>> I also received many gifts.
But 17th birthday is worst birthday, since my birthday was day of midterm exam.
>>> The worst birthday I had was my 17th birthday because it was our midterm exam.
So I couldn\'t go to restaurant, also I couldn\'t eat see mustard soup.
>>> I was not able to go to the restaurant and was not able to have a mustard soup.
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